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  • Home
  • Bio
  • Books
    • Any More Complicated Than That
    • This
    • Prudence: A Tempestuous Night of Pervasive Desires
    • Prudence
    • The Shadow in the Wind
    • Song of the Curlew
    • August Falling
    • Just Another Week in Suburbia
    • Pride (Hardback)
    • Pride (Paperback)
    • The Launch Book
  • Screenwriting
  • Productions
    • The Other Side of Paradise (2021)
    • The Abnorms (2020)
    • Heritage Pitch Deck
    • Little Diva Rising (2019)
  • Services
    • Editing
    • Speaker
    • Workshop Facilitator
      • Mentoring
      • The Novel Experience
  • Contemporaneous: A Living Novel

    Contemporaneous: Chapters’ 4 & 5

    4. This is too much too soon. It’s terrible structure. If I was editing this, I’d say there’s too much negative focus on Lana, and not enough of whatever the relationship was before. There’s no balance. It needs balance to…

  • Contemporaneous: A Living Novel

    Contemporaneous: Chapters’ 2 & 3

    2. “How was your day?” she asks me. I hate this question, although not because she asks it (although she knows how I dislike the question), but because my day was like the day before it, and the one before…

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