A Vulcan visionary, Sybok (Laurence Luckinbill), engineers a hostage situation on the planet of galactic peace, Nimbus III – a planet that hosts ambassadors from the Federation, the Klingon Empire, and the Romulan Empire.
The Enterprise 1701-A, under the command of James T. Kirk (William Shatner), is sent to neutralise the situation and rescue the hostages.
While Kirk’s mission initially seems successful, the hostages turn on Kirk and his crew. They have become fanatical supporters of Sybok, who has the power to explore a person’s pain, and free them of it. Consequently, they grow devoted to him.
Sybok commandeers Kirk’s ship and reveals his plan is to go beyond the Great Barrier to the centre of the galaxy, where God has summoned him. It’s also revealed Sybok is the half-brother of Spock (Leonard Nimoy).
Sybok liberates Dr. McCoy (DeForest Kelley) of his pain, and explores Spock’s. Kirk refuses, saying his pain makes him who he is.
When Sybok asks Bones and Spock to go with him, both decline (refusing to leave Kirk behind), showing the bond that the triumvirate share.
A young Klingon commander, Klaa (Todd Bryant), is eager to build his reputation as a warrior and decides killing Kirk will accomplish that. He orders that his ship pursue the Enterprise.
The Enterprise penetrates the Great Barrier – some terrible CGI cloud effects that I think were recycled (aesthetically and thematically) for Star Wars: The Rise of Skywalker – and gets to the planet.
The arrival at this destination convinces Kirk, Spock, and McCoy that something is out here. They parley with Sybok and agree to go down to the planet together. But it turns out not to be God but some evil entity.
Sybok sacrifices himself to give the others time to escape. The Enterprise can only beam up two of the three. Kirk gives the order for Spock and Bones to be beamed up. The Klingons arrive. Spock commandeers their ship through the Klingon Ambassador and saves Kirk.
And that’s it.
In text, it doesn’t sound that bad.
So where does it fail?
The Star Trek Trilogy
Star Trek’s leap to the big screen with Star Trek: The Motion Picture (1979) was considered a dreary bore, although it’s appreciated over the years as a true Star Trek adventure that’s about exploration and discovering new life.
It’s something the new incarnations don’t understand.
The plot is too muddy. It has political leanings with the hostage situation, a militaristic subplot with the Klingon Commander pursuing Kirk, religious undertones in the search for God, philosophical debate about a power higher than us, and the story of exploration in going into the unknown.
It never truly settles deeply enough into one story to realise its potential.
Also, the unknown is listed as being the “center of the galaxy” beyond the Great Barrier.
In the theatrical release, the Great Barrier is just some shitty CGI clouds. Sybok portrays it as an illusion that faith can transcend. It’s a big build-up for little return. In the novelization, they have to reconfigure the Enterprise’s shields to withstand the Great Barrier, suggesting that it’s energy base (and possibly scientifically manufactured). That would’ve been worth carrying across.
The centre of the galaxy is a bigger issue.
In Star Trek, only a small portion of the galaxy has been charted. How could they know where the centre is in relation to their starting position, which would be Earth? The coordinates of the centre of the galaxy are listed as “zero-zero-zero”. Again, wouldn’t the frame of reference be Earth, given that’s their starting point?
It feels as if the story would’ve worked better had it focused purely on locating God in the unknown, discovering it was some sort of entity, and doing more to defeat and escape it.
In Star Trek canon, the Vulcans experienced such volatile emotions, they mastered control over them and installed logic as their overriding philosophy.
Sybok has reverted, which is the reason God contacted him. This is interesting to see a Vulcan at his most primal. I cannot commend Luckinbill’s performance highly enough – charismatic, compelling, and memorable.
But he’s also sold to us as Spock’s half-brother.
It’s always annoying when canon is ret-conned. Yes, Kirk gains a son in The Wrath of Khan, but Kirk’s a womanizer and the relationship presumably happened in that large chunk of time he commanded the Enterprise that The Original Series didn’t cover. We don’t learn much about his life outside of the Enterprise so there’s a lot to play with. Giving him a son doesn’t fundamentally change who he is, or how we perceive him.
That’s not the case with Spock: we see his father Sarek (Mark Lenard) in The Original Series episode ‘Journey to Babel’ (season 2, episode 10 – 1967) and in Star Trek III and IV. Their family is established.
You’d think such a prominent half-brother – or accomplished foster sister – would get a mention somewhere.
Also, their existence recontexualises so many interactions Spock has. In the case of Michael Burnham (Sonequa Martin-Green) from Star Trek: Discovery(2017 – ), wouldn’t having a human sister change Spock’s outlook on humans? Instead, he’s always bemused by human behaviour and how Kirk responds to situations. Wouldn’t having an emotional brother (in Sybok) also change Spock’s interpretation of emotions?
Another query is does Sybok have to be Spock’s brother for this story to function? The answer? Not really. It gives it a tie-in, but hardly an irreplaceable one. Sybok could’ve easily been an uncle, Sarek’s brother, a former student or teacher, a Romulan dissident exploring Vulcan theology, or simply a banished visionary (and perhaps one the Vulcans have excised from their history).
We can’t say that about David in Star Trek II. Being Kirk’s son plays an integral part in that story.
After Leonard Nimoy had helmed Star Trek III and Star Trek IV, William Shatner took the reins for Star Trek V.
In various books, he outlines the difficulty behind production, although it’s only pertinent to the aesthetics of the movie, rather than the integrity of the story.
The previous two films have an informality about the crew’s camaraderie that works. In both The Search for Spock and The Voyage Home, they’ve gone rogue (although the ship-bound operations still retain their professionalism), so you can understand the segue into familiarity.
Here, they’re on-duty on their new ship, they’re issued an important mission, so we should see them operating in a professional capacity – as they do in Star Trek VI: The Undiscovered Country (1991) – but, for the most part, there’s an air of nonchalance.
They also don’t wear the uniforms to which we’ve grown accustomed (and which we now correlate with Starfleet), so that adds to tonal shift.
Everything also looks just a bit off – a result of a different company doing the special effects (as ILM were busy) – so it’s another reason we’re jolted from everything we know and expect.
The special effects themselves are so-so, and hurt the suspension of disbelief.
There are also lots of improbable sequences, e.g.
the Starfleet Chief of Staff (writer and producer Harve Bennett) recalls Kirk, Spock, and Bones from shore leave to take an under-prepared Enterprise to the hostage situation. The Chief of Staff reasons he needs an experienced commander and that the Enterprise’s problems will have to be solved en route. Surely Starfleet has more able ships with equally capable commanding officers that are already out there. A possible fix would’ve been for Kirk to be rock climbing on some cool alien world while on shore leave with the Enterprise deep into a five-year mission.
Uhura (Nichelle Nichols) lures Sybok’s people on Nimbus IV with a siren’s song. Where does she get the burlesque outfit? With no disrespect to Nichols, why would fanatical soldiers loyal to Sybok’s cause be so easily distracted?
Sybok commandeers the Enterprise. How? It has a crew of over 400 people. Did he free every single individual of their pain? The crew are part of a command structure. They’re not won over by an usurper. The only person who retains his individuality is Scotty (James Doohan).
Later, Kirk, Spock, and McCoy are fleeing and have to climb up a turbolift shaft while Sybok’s people are searching for them. Spock has enough time to leave Kirk and McCoy, duck back (presumably to his quarters) for his turbo-boots, then return.
There are lots of moments like this which seem to have no causal basis in the narrative.
The Enterprise is called to Vulcan, where Sarek informs Kirk and Spock of Sybok’s mission to reconnect with some elemental power he believes is God, but which (Sarek believes) can only lead to self-annihilation. Sybok is a former student, and his theological leanings have been excised from Vulcan history because they’re considered dangerous. Erasing them was the logical step.
Given the Vulcans base their lives on logic, they would likely be atheists. The question then remains: what has contacted Sybok? Has embracing his emotions helped him evolve and talk to a higher power? Or is there some power trying to manipulate him for its own gain? Sarek won’t be drawn further on the subject, but demands that Sybok be stopped by whatever measures necessary.
Following a series of clues the Enterprise pursue Sybok, only for crew to experience visions of God. This then taps into the nature of faith, and could explore humanity’s treatment of the unknown. Human religion isn’t really a thing in Star Trek, so it would’ve also been interesting to see the characters question whether science has killed God, or some higher power does exist.
If an enemy was required, they could’ve employed the Romulans (for a change), who have been following Sybok’s crusade and intend to weaponise his discovery.
Kirk and company capture Sybok, who claims his vision is the First Life, a God who gave birth to life throughout the galaxy.
They are now so far into the journey that Kirk and crew decide to go the whole way.
It’s not God they find, though, but some ancient entity masquerading as a god – perhaps the Vulcan equivalent of a devil, who tempted ancestral Vulcans to engage their emotions, as it fed from them and could channel them into a destructive telekinetic power.
The Romulans try to embrace it, seeing it as powerful. As happens with Belloq (Paul Freeman ) once he opens the Ark in Raiders of the Lost Ark (1981), the power could destroy them. Sybok sacrifices himself so the others get away. The end.
This could’ve tapped into Star Trek’s mandate to explore both geographically as well as the human condition.
My Fan Fiction
Decades and decades go (like three of them) I wrote fan fiction.
It may seem nerdy, but there are some great stories in fan fiction. Also, as a developing writer, fan fiction gives you a framework in which to operate that teaches you about structure, arcs, and plotting.
Anyway, in my Star Trek: The Next Generation fan fiction, Deanna Troi (Marina Sirtis) began telepathically hearing Sybok’s plea for help, which had been amplified by the entity. The entity was doing this to try and free itself.
The crew of the Enterprise 1701-D embarked on a rescue mission, found Sybok, and outsmarted the entity, which turned out to be a rogue Q.
Later, I wrote a scene for Star Trek V: The Final Frontier to sit between Kirk beaming off the planet and appearing on the Klingon vessel.
Kirk appears in a nether dimension and finds himself confronted by Q (John de Lancie), who introduces himself as one of the entity’s brethren, and elaborates they imprisoned the entity here because it’s evil and that this location is not to be disturbed again. Q also says they’re intrigued by Kirk’s efforts, and have begun to watch humanity.
I thought that would explain things, and provide a linkage between The Original Series and The Next Generation.
It also doesn’t disrupt canon, since Kirk doesn’t know who Q is, Q doesn’t identify himself, and he simply becomes an extension of the entity that Kirk already knows about.
But There is Good Stuff
For the hodgepodge it is, there’s some brilliant stuff in Star Trek V.
while rock climbing, Kirk falls and Spock saves him. Later, Bones chastises Kirk about undertaking such a risky exercise. Kirk said he knew he’d be fine. When pressed, Kirk confesses that he knows when he dies, he’ll die alone – meaning Spock or Bones won’t be there. This ties into the movie’s conclusion when it seems Kirk is alone, but then Spock saves him. However, it also foreshadows Kirk’s death in Star Trek: Generations (1994).
Kirk, Spock, and Bones have been incarcerated in the forward observation room. As they approach the Great Barrier, Kirk looks at a plaque on the antique (sailing) ship’s wheel which reads, “TO GO WHERE NO MAN HAS GONE BEFORE.” It’s a cool touchpoint.
there are various action scenes that are handled well, such as Kirk’s shuttle crash-docking into the Enterprise’s docking bay, Kirk’s tussle with Sybok as Spock picks up the gun, and the arrival of the Bird of the Prey as everybody on the Enterprise is transfixed by vision of Kirk’s landing party on the planet.
one of my favourite scenes – in any incarnation of Star Trek – is when Sybok talks to Bones, Spock, and Kirk about their pain.
I’ve always thought Bones’s pain – that he helped euthanised his father, only for a cure to his condition to be discovered shortly afterwards – was forced. They needed something for Bones, and I guess this would be the great quandary for a clinician.
In the theatrical release, Sybok shows Spock’s birth, and Sarek’s disapproval at the baby being “so human”. In the screenplay, this extends into a young Spock wanting to go with Sarek when he leaves Vulcan. Both scenes are about acceptance.
Kirk declines to have his pain explored, and makes a great speech about pain making us who we are. Shatner’s terrific again.
I haven’t seen Star Trek V for a while, although I did periodically watch it (as well as the other movies).
Despite it not being a good film, there are still things to enjoy in it.